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Hopelessness

a empty blackhole sucking and shrinking diminishing and fading spiraling into darkness no hope of ending except to reach invisibility infinity smothering that reality to nothing no complaints, resistance or existence only silence extinct feelings and emotions thoughts and actions wrong no longer natures mistake corrected

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/19/2012 5:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Becky. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2012 1:21:00 PM
Very nicely expressed i enjoyed this! Laura :)
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Becky Fritz
Date: 4/18/2012 1:28:00 PM
tyvm for the positive feedback. first poem shared. poem illiterate. know zilch about them, ie:types (form). written about half dozen and probably read even less. thanxs again for the encouragement to continue

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