Hopelessly

Hopelessly falling
even though I know 
that it's wrong 
I can't seem to resist this calling
we can't even put our all in 
like mickey mouse build a house
your not even an available foot
to land on so I don't play those games
I just gaze into your eyes
and watch as I fill with amazement
because since I've met you
I can't breath. 
I miserably seek you out
It's a burden I will live with
because even if it's just friendship
I crave being near you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shahwan Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 7:11 AM
Beautiful poem.
Brown Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 5:04 AM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors Shahana. Love, Carol
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