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Hopeless Romantic

You play with my heart as if it were an instrument to your entertainment. You use my emotions as the beat to your song. You look at me but say nothing, leaving me empty. Is my love real to you? No, You’re just singing through my soul with notes, cutting me, deeper and deeper, with every verse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/18/2017 7:11:00 AM
Don't be hopeless,i think it's your life experience.
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Date: 4/30/2017 11:39:00 AM
Very expressive, Taylor. Welcome to PS
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Date: 4/29/2017 11:36:00 PM
Very beautiful poem, with musical but very sad undertone. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Date: 4/29/2017 6:26:00 PM
Lovely metaphor, Taylor! What a great poem you've written for your first entry to poetrysoup! Welcome!
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Taylor Bottorff
Date: 4/29/2017 6:38:00 PM
Thank you so much I'm glad you like it!

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