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Hopeless Fool

What will I become? What will I ever be? What will happen to someone like me? Will I reach the top or ever fall down? Should I just stop and forever frown? To reach the space so hard is true If you are weak you'll never do So be strong and hold on tight You can do it, just have to fight Learn from it and don't be a crap For our mistakes will make us tough Take it all be positive 'Coz we always have prerogatives So prepare ourselves what lies ahead There are things left unsearched ~Chrisna Vergara

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/26/2024 7:57:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Jagdish Pal

Date: 5/27/2017 1:53:00 AM

A remarkable poem full of positivity! Really a good read!

Eric Boddie

Date: 5/20/2017 10:44:00 AM

the search for self....will only end with death....with the last breath taken....our purpose will awaken....and then we will realize....that this Earthly Life is just a disguise....powerful write chrisna....;)

Chrisna Vergara
Date: 5/20/2017 12:49:00 PM