Chrisna Vergara Poet Rhyme

Hopeless Fool

What will I become?
What will I ever be?
What will happen to someone like me?
Will I reach the top or ever fall down?
Should I just stop and forever frown?

To reach the space so hard is true
If you are weak you'll never do
So be strong and hold on tight
You can do it, just have to fight

Learn from it and don't be a crap
For our mistakes will make us tough
Take it all be positive
'Coz we always have prerogatives
So prepare ourselves what lies ahead
There are things left unsearched


~Chrisna Vergara

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Beata Agustin December 26, 2024 at 7:57 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Jagdish Pal May 27, 2017 at 1:53 AM A remarkable poem full of positivity! Really a good read!

Eric Boddie May 20, 2017 at 10:44 AM the search for self....will only end with death....with the last breath taken....our purpose will awaken....and then we will realize....that this Earthly Life is just a disguise....powerful write chrisna....;) Chrisna Vergara May 20, 2017 at 12:49 PM Hahaha! Amazing comment! It's like you've written a whole new poem just for this.. Thank you Eric! :)

Maurice Yvonne May 13, 2017 at 8:36 AM Beautiful write as sad as it is. Lots Of Love, armand. Chrisna Vergara May 20, 2017 at 12:58 PM Thank you so much Armand! :)

Darren White May 13, 2017 at 8:27 AM We will never know, so it is up to us to be strong, and work for our future the best we can :) Chrisna Vergara May 20, 2017 at 1:00 PM That's true! This means so much Darren, thank you. :)