Sofia Shteyngolts Poet Free verse

Hopeless

I look at you.
Think of you.
Try to understand,
Why you still won’t give me a chance.
Now I know,
I messed up, you did too,
but it’s too late to fix anything now.
It’s too late to re-try.
Now that I know that, I’ve lost all hope,
I almost wanted to kill myself,
I cried at night.
And you didn’t notice me.

But now I no longer see a point in all this.
I guess it’s hopeless.

I... give... up...

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Zzzzz Zzzzz May 10, 2011 at 6:12 AM A rather desolate and despairing poem. The pain and feelings of hopelessness drip from the page, which is, I guess, what you wanted to achieve. A good poem of its kind.