Hopeless

Don’t touch me. I’m quiet, and tall And out of reach. I am weak, and worried And out of sound. I am nothing, But the fear in falling; Wondering why I’m not touched

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/10/2018 6:37:00 PM

Hello Brooke Noble, so nice to meet you. Yes this person in this poem is hopeless. I am thinking she does not trust.Have a nice evening my friend.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 11/7/2018 2:04:00 PM

There is much said in few words. I like it, thought provoking.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/3/2018 2:26:00 PM

I think I like this poem. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/18/2018 12:58:00 AM

The ending of this is terrific! I am going right back now to re-read this a hundred times. Obviously a FAV.

Brooke Noble
Date: 10/18/2018 2:13:00 AM

you are too good to me, I get all sorts of positive feedback from you that makes me feel like a million bucks. Thanks for all of your input and advice