Hopeless

Don’t touch me.
I’m quiet, and tall
And out of reach.

I am weak, and worried
And out of sound.

I am nothing,
But the fear in falling;

Wondering why I’m not touched
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Hello Brooke Noble, so nice to meet you. Yes this person in this poem is hopeless. I am thinking she does not trust.Have a nice evening my friend.
Theraven Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 2:26 PM
I think I like this poem. -Richard
Krutsinger Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 12:58 AM
The ending of this is terrific! I am going right back now to re-read this a hundred times. Obviously a FAV.
Noble Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 2:13 AM
you are too good to me, I get all sorts of positive feedback from you that makes me feel like a million bucks. Thanks for all of your input and advice
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