Hopefully Hopeful

It started in the night
the stars
the cars

It started on the balcany
the sight 
the fright

It started with the adrenaline
Yet soft
and free

It started with the boy
only around
the bend

The move was love
the toy 
that destroys

The action was glue
to follow 
the move

The end
was 
me 
and
you......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 6, 2014 at 4:11 AM
Beautiful. Well-written - write more, please? You are a great writer. Thanks for commenting on my poem many yearz ago! hehe have a sun-shining summer. Stay cool.
A  Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 7:55 PM
NICE ONE, ENJOYED THIS WRITE-SKAT
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