Hopeful Hearts

Somewhere out there, there is a ray of light, 
glittering bright against the pouring rain,
that leaves a mark that ripens into stain, 
that grows brighter as it fades out of sight, 
to show the faint heart that it is but right, 
to shed one's blood to reap the precious grain, 
somewhere out there. 

The cost of fame can be the dark of night;
No fabled feat can bloom without the pain, 
or else, all endeavors may go in vain. 
The hopeful hearts must learn to hold on tight,
somewhere out there. 

October 26, 2022 

Rousing Rondine Poetry Contest (3rd place) 
Sponsored by: Jeff Kyser
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fowler Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 7:24 AM
Love this Roger. Congratulations on your win! :)
Roger  Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Thank you very much ... Couldn't find a better refrain...
Alex Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 7:52 PM
"to show the faint heart that it is but right, to shed one's blood to reap the precious grain" - Beautiful.
Roger  Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 8:58 PM
Thank you very much... Success is worth drops of blood...
Miller Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 6:53 AM
Congratulations this is a fine rondine and worthy of the placement
Roger  Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Thank you very much... My first time to write in this form...
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