David William Breidenthal Poet Free verse

Hopeful Delight

Seeing positive results
Sprout out from the happy ground
It grows as fast as tomato plants
You're no longer lost, but finally found!

Dreaming of you
Is falling in love with fiction
And it doesn't sound right 
This heartfelt desire is merely an infatuation
I will remain mild like a mama panda with her beloved cubs...
You can rely on me to share with you hopeful delight

Free from the chains  of  utter pity
Are you alone and blue?
Put out the blue fire that devours you
It shows that you're a man of bountiful bravery
You're no longer lost. 
You are found for good.
You have good luck that gives you the guts to run the extra mile

dreaming of you
is kissing fiction... but it's so sincere
so genuine and precious like a redstone
you are more precious than an emerald stone
I will stick to you like a magnet
I love you, so still no regret
I hope to be your compass when you get lost in the forest
just try your best
 try your best
you can depend on me to present you with hopeful delight
or should you some hope in mind
I wish you and I could thrive
in the future... we will engage in awesome adventures
if you can keep up with me! Hah!

observing unique auras
blooming out of the blue 
Out of the blue
it catches my eyes like fireworks in the midnight sky
you are no longer lost, love...
But you will be found in no time.. my gorgeous dove
make me drink in your undefinable honor
plant in me your nourishing friendship
it reveals to me your robe of jubilance
your rope of eloquence
you're so mature and so articulate
you are no longer lost,
I found you like treasure underneath the ground
I dug you up like gold
I mined you like gold...
you're that important to me
let me give you a gift
a gift that's carved by my love

I hope you gain hopeful delight
when you see me damasked in beautiful light

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Jake Ponce May 24, 2014 at 8:24 AM 21st on the list: David, this poem felt like I woke up Monday morning, refreshed from the weekend and ready to be early in school because I just can't wait to see my crush. I also felt that I couldn't wait to let that particular person see me brimming with positive energy. Everything is black and white except the two of you and it's going to be one fine day. :)

Casarah Nance April 29, 2014 at 7:22 AM Wow, this one is really awesome. I love the text and the feeling behind it. "dreaming of you is falling in love with fiction" "we will engage in awesome adventures if you can keep up with me" ... great lines. Very fun and sweet and flirty. Great job David :)