Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Tanka

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" HOPE " FREE PHOTO.

Hope Viii

Hope a firm raft is
 
Sailing over the rough seas

Among parlous riffs,
 
Determined to reach the shores

Of dreams' realization!*








© Demetrios Trifiatis
        29 May 2021
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* Tanka: 5-7-5-7-7

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Vijay Pandit May 29, 2021 at 4:29 AM Your words of hope resonate my friend. So well articulated. Demetrios Trifiatis May 29, 2021 at 10:49 AM I appreciate your words of appreciation, dearest friend, Vijay. Thank you! Blessings

Sotto Poet May 29, 2021 at 3:40 AM A message of wisdom and grace, to have hope that a powerful vessel is sailing across troubled seas having resolved to attain one's destination. And that's all that we can do is to keep hope and faith. Blessings and a safe weekend Demetrios Trifiatis May 29, 2021 at 10:47 AM This raft was given to Man by God as the last means for Man to keep his dreams alive. Thank you for your wonderful comment, dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings.

Tom Cunningham May 29, 2021 at 1:35 AM Words of wisdom Demetrios, we hold onto hope for dear life, never letting go. Enjoy your weekend Tom Demetrios Trifiatis May 29, 2021 at 2:43 AM Thank you for your gracious visit and comment, my dearest friend, Tom. Be blessed.