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Hope a firm raft is Sailing over the rough seas Among parlous riffs, Determined to reach the shores Of dreams' realization!* © Demetrios Trifiatis 29 May 2021 - * Tanka: 5-7-5-7-7

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/29/2021 4:29:00 AM

Your words of hope resonate my friend. So well articulated.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/29/2021 10:49:00 AM

I appreciate your words of appreciation, dearest friend, Vijay. Thank you! Blessings

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/29/2021 3:40:00 AM

A message of wisdom and grace, to have hope that a powerful vessel is sailing across troubled seas having resolved to attain one's destination. And that's all that we can do is to keep hope and faith. Blessings and a safe weekend

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/29/2021 10:47:00 AM

This raft was given to Man by God as the last means for Man to keep his dreams alive. Thank you for your wonderful comment, dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/29/2021 1:35:00 AM

Words of wisdom Demetrios, we hold onto hope for dear life, never letting go. Enjoy your weekend Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/29/2021 2:43:00 AM

Thank you for your gracious visit and comment, my dearest friend, Tom. Be blessed.