Stephen Pennell Poet Free verse

Hope To See

Eyes closed tight I hope to see 
A sight to please me, flowers may be 
A fairytale castle, A knight on a horse
Please make it nice, not horrid please  
just two massive daisy's   would be fine
A mound of chocolate , new handbags may be ? 
new shoes or a pile of cash 
Please make it nice, not horrid please  
if you cannot I'll understand, just make sure my mate skat's around   


comp entry 14042016 wrote in 1st person pd

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Ralph Sergi April 20, 2016 at 7:39 AM Congratulations on a very descriptive poem, Steven. Stephen Pennell April 20, 2016 at 9:44 AM thank you for stopping by and your remarks stephen

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 19, 2016 at 11:01 PM Congrats on ur awesome win stephen.. Stephen Pennell April 20, 2016 at 2:43 AM thank you for your comments, and stopping by stephen

Jan Allison April 18, 2016 at 12:23 PM love your interpretation of the image - I know I commented on this before as I remember the line about Skat - looks like the PS gremlin struck again:-) hugs Jan xx Stephen Pennell April 18, 2016 at 2:08 PM yeah i saw it to, its vanished was there before yeah skat and pd are famous made 3 of my poems two where limericks mind lol

Bl Devnath April 18, 2016 at 11:45 AM Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful pictured poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Stephen Pennell April 18, 2016 at 12:15 PM thank you for stopping by stephen

Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2016 at 1:51 AM This was mighty interesting Stephen:), Congratulations on your awesome entry for my PICTURE contest. Thank you for keeping it under 10 lines... Stop by my latest blog "Photo Questions" and enjoy my take on the same picture of "Lilly Covering Her eyes." I wrote a little something myself. Enjoy if you like. Always ~LINDA~ Stephen Pennell April 18, 2016 at 3:07 AM no Heroic Crown of Sonnets here pd roll on the next pd contest thank you will do x