Hope the Rare Commodity

she can’t give up
and needs to get beyond
just wanting to survive
she dreams of waking
from the nightmare
that has her captive
not knowing if and how
she’s longing to recover

she’s filled with fear
she holds her breath
and keeps her distance
gone in hiding
she longs for times
of warmth and serenity
she hardly dares
to dream of sunshine
lilac blooms in fields of clover
and children’s laughter      



AP: 1st place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 9:45 AM
A tender write, lovely done, Line. xomo
Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 9:51 AM
Thanks, Maureen. Most appreciated.
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