Hope Prevails

(This is an experimental poem consisting of three poetry forms to make it complete. First stanza is Haiku, 2nd-3rd-4th is Sijo and last stanza is a Tanka. Hope you would enjoy. )



'Was lost in my thoughts -
As if, sitting on a cliff -
Decision awaits

Never been there-
Dreaming or what?
Cool breeze came
And fireflies

Closed my eyes
To dive in deep -
Fragrance pervades
And you came in

You held me tight
And told me, " Fly..."
I was afraid
And asked you, " Why? "

" 'Cause, life is divine,
Give it a try" - with Spring blooms
My desires rose high
Clouds got cleared, with the rainfall
I breathed in - fragrance still there

(C) Anindya Mohan Tagore (Bobby)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 5, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Dear Anindya Mohan , A beautiful cocktail of poetry served ... Loved it! There is a deep meaning and a happy ending note of trying what we wish to do in life! Loved it:-) love, Anulaxmi:-)
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August 5, 2015 at 10:45 PM
Thank you very much for your lovely comments and love for my work. Warm regards, Bobby
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