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Hope Or Curse

Poor lad lay there blight weak worse Rough rag spreads on hope or curse Kind hearts frail to fill his gut Gold and cents ring from rich purse.

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Rashi Soni

Date: 4/2/2020 9:55:00 AM

A scene often seen. This bitter truth is heart breaking. Well-written, Rashi

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 10:45:00 AM

Thank you Rashi.. Truths are sometimes bitter..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/15/2020 5:54:00 PM

A sad one indeed.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 10:44:00 AM

Yes.. Sad realities..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/12/2020 7:04:00 PM

Another touching jueju, Jenish. Looks as if this style really agrees with you. Keep 'em coming! Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 10:57:00 PM

Trying on different forms, never stick to any.. Thank you for that inspiring support Gershon..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2020 5:23:00 PM

Too common a scene today. So sadly true

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 10:54:00 PM

Yes.. true in ever corner of the world.. Thank you..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/12/2020 7:33:00 AM

Touching true story effectively written dearest, Jenish!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 8:47:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/12/2020 7:21:00 AM

Sad but true--well said, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Vijay..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2020 5:52:00 AM

- A beautiful wish for the poor, Jenish ... especially for the poor children ... a picture that bleeds my heart - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 6:04:00 AM

Thanks for that kind heart that bleeds... And thanks for your kindness towards my poem.. Have a great day..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/12/2020 5:08:00 AM

A scene so common today Jenish, many help but many look the other way. Tom

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 5:21:00 AM

True Tom.. Many look the other way..