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Hope Or Curse

Poor lad lay there blight weak worse Rough rag spreads on hope or curse Kind hearts frail to fill his gut Gold and cents ring from rich purse.

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Date: 4/2/2020 9:55:00 AM

A scene often seen. This bitter truth is heart breaking. Well-written, Rashi

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 10:45:00 AM

Thank you Rashi.. Truths are sometimes bitter..

Date: 3/15/2020 5:54:00 PM

A sad one indeed.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 10:44:00 AM

Yes.. Sad realities..

Date: 3/12/2020 7:04:00 PM

Another touching jueju, Jenish. Looks as if this style really agrees with you. Keep 'em coming! Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 10:57:00 PM

Trying on different forms, never stick to any.. Thank you for that inspiring support Gershon..

Date: 3/12/2020 5:23:00 PM

Too common a scene today. So sadly true

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 10:54:00 PM

Yes.. true in ever corner of the world.. Thank you..

Date: 3/12/2020 7:33:00 AM

Touching true story effectively written dearest, Jenish!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 8:47:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios..

Date: 3/12/2020 7:21:00 AM

Sad but true--well said, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Vijay..

Date: 3/12/2020 5:52:00 AM

- A beautiful wish for the poor, Jenish ... especially for the poor children ... a picture that bleeds my heart - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 6:04:00 AM

Thanks for that kind heart that bleeds... And thanks for your kindness towards my poem.. Have a great day..

Date: 3/12/2020 5:08:00 AM

A scene so common today Jenish, many help but many look the other way. Tom

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 5:21:00 AM

True Tom.. Many look the other way..