Hope of Renewal

As the last rose petal falls swiftly down
The last of the great roses of summer
What a great summer that was lived_you known
Rose had much character an affirmer

Fall approaches with sure desolation
Only bare branches with prickly thorns left
Mocking Bird nest with nesting cessation
Protected by the Rose as in a  cleft

Used up_bare waiting for winter's cold breath
Not knowing what this winter chill will bring
As the petals flood onto the ground_death
Hope awaits but winter comes with its sting

Will the sap rise again coursing through vine
Revitalization __ one  bud sure sign
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Villarosa Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 8:15 AM
startling for an end of a season but rejuvenating its youthful appearance from the offshoot of another tiny bud as a sign of new hope, very nice message about nature and change, congratulaltions on winning this contest, Sara. (^_^) Noel.
Muzzey Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your fourth place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl
Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 1:49 AM
wonderful peace my friend
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 11:04 AM
Congrats Sara on your win with this inspiring sonnet --I think your last couplet ended this really nicely :) --nikko :)
Mannan Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 9:02 PM
A lovely sonnet Sara. Many congratulations for this win.
Richards Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:51 PM
There is hope in the end lines of this lovely thoughtful poem! Well done, Sara. Congratulations! ~ Carrie
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:26 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Sara
Devonshire Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:23 PM
Sara, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:55 PM
Congratulations Sis on your poem's success with the top winning circle. Enjoyed this beautiful poem's content. Aga;pe, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:51 PM
Congrats Sara on your winning poem in Moses contest with this brilliant write and exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another sweet victory my friend ..hope u are pain free today luv..
Hilliker Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 10:30 PM
This is beautifully written, Sara. You have great range in poetry. Have a great weekend, and thanks for my congrats on When You Think of Me.
A   Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 8:15 PM
Hi, Sara"wow! your spell bounding words are captured perfect in this poem. A little sad with happy spirited emotions to go through. Amazing with them deep thoughts. But, like you said at the end, ( one bud sure sign )I really did enjoyed the ending. take care,..p.d.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 3:22 PM
Sweet Sonnet to the Fall and bye to Summer .. but this refreshing poem makes me happy even though I am a summer girl.. hope u are well today .. we are preparing for Eric's leaving tomorrow night.. ho hum.. again...
Anto Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 3:14 PM
Thank you for your kind comment on "A dark Place"...I aspire to be as creative as you are within your writing Take care Paul
Devonshire Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 8:06 AM
Beautiful description of the rose fading as winter approaches. Surely it will rise again come spring! Great work, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Rhinem Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 7:36 AM
Smile ~ "Christ the Messiah;" did "Your Beauty" know that? ~ Again, always good to see "Your Preciousness" &, "Beautiful Poe" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Lovely Sara Kendrick,' Amid The Sweet Fragrant Petals of, 'The Roses Bloom; Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Precious Lady!:) ~
Rhinem Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 7:30 AM
Smile ~ "There 'You Are' Dear, 'Lovely, Precious & Gifted Sara Kendrick!!!'" ~ What a profoundly reflective & soulful poe my dear lady; very pretty ~ "Thank You," for stopping by & for "Your Beauties" kind & thoughtful com &, "Yes," a single pearl is an amazing thought indeed but, such is "The Beauty of 'Our Father!!!'" ~ Did "Your Treasures" know that, I once beheld years ago "Heaven," descending upon the face of the earth &, I even stood amid its midst with ~ ....Cont:)
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October 12, 2010 at 6:49 AM
That alligator was trained by a bad dog. when they had the parade on Saturday, there was a box alligator in the road some one mad and we put it in our car to use later. It was made well. That is what gave me the idea.
Mehta Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 6:24 AM
The very beauty of the Shakespearean sonnet, Sara
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