Hope of Life Eternal

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The doctor's words were very clear
Life here is short and death is near
The diagnosis was but one hurdle
    To the hope of life eternal

Shock, dismay, captivate and imprison
Then hope comes in a Savior that's risen
A heart made not of flesh will live vernally
    To the hope of life eternal  

Hope of glory strengthens one's deepest soul
Far away in a glorious land never grow old
Arrhythmia scares but faith takes hold and circles
    To the hope of life eternal

Each day helplessness reachest out to claim
Then upon God's word feast and fears tame
Thoughts race to life here is just a rehearsal
    To the hope of life eternal

Sponsor: Cyndi MacMillian
Contest: Helpless, A Kyrielle
Written: Friday, May 02, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 9, 2014 at 9:57 AM
Sara, Congratulations, on your win in Cyndi's "HELPLESS, KYRIELLE CONTEST." take care -LINDA-
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June 7, 2014 at 3:23 AM
Such a compelling and strong testament to your Christian faith Sara! I especially liked line three of the last verse...Many congrats and thank you for supporting our contest - Tim
May Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 9:52 PM
Beautiful write Sara...Congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 9:50 PM
love the personal touch on yours, Sara. Congrats for this win.
Macmillan Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations on the win in our contest, Sara. A stirring kyrielle that speaks of "carrying on" and the strength of faith. Well done! Cyndi
Mehta Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 2:21 AM
Perfect Kyrielle with apt take on the theme, congrats on a fine win, sara
A. Sharma Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 11:07 PM
Well said Sara ! never shud we lose hope in Him ,,, wonderful write n expression of powerful emotions ,, congrats on win !
Gibson Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Appreciate this fine writing, Sara. So wonderful to find our hope in Him for He is the source. Congratulations on your placement.
Horne Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 9:51 AM
beautiful words of faith inspired by a scary situation, my friend
Toil Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 7:42 AM
Sara. After our lengthy conversation yesterday, I think I know what inspired this lovely poem. I won't mention it here of course. Just know that this is your gift to the world: to find beauty in all you see. Hugs;) Ben
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May 3, 2014 at 5:15 PM
On this write i give thee the highest number possible and put it in one word BRAVO, simply beautiful inspirational my dear lady and wonderfully done. take care love this very much good luck in the contest but i have to say i don't see how anyone could do better than this poem on this subject. cheri
Shiells Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 4:19 PM
Hi Sara, This was an incredibly exquisite write. It touched my heart. Your a terrific writer.The best of the best wish's in the contest. Thanks for this beautiful write. Peace, Deborah
Hamilton Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 3:07 PM
very good poem Sara hope you are keeping well? hugs
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 11:33 PM
gosh, what a nice poem on this theme, Sara. Hope you do well in her contest. really lovely
Halliday Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Nice. I have to look up what vernal means though.
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