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Hope Not Lost

I stand on the edge of a great cavity of darkness. The wind whispers at my ankles, urging, pulling. Hollow voices call to me, I strain to hear their message. Closer I feel myself inching towards the gaping blackness, ears listening as voices echo below. They call to me, chanting, haunting, making my head whirl with madness. Slowly I feel the darkness surround me, wanting to own me. “Come” they whisper, “feel the darkness” their voices sing in my mind, “join us with your sorrow”. Shadows begin to engulf my spirit with hopeless words, words of despair. Frantically I feel my soul clinging to existence as it dances within its death. I peer over the edge of the opening that threatens my life. A great wall of emotion grinds at my very being. Words strike at me from all directions, slashing open wounds buried deep. Something from inside me cries, praying for mercy, for help. Faintly I hear something, someone. One word softy pricks my heart, one word….HOPE.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/18/2012 6:36:00 PM
Very expressive, created vivid images. We always have hope to cling to.
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Date: 9/18/2012 3:14:00 PM
Very emotive and expressive work that you have penned..I am glad that you ended with that word Hope for I feel that the writer of this one needs Hope to cling to in life...Sara
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Date: 9/18/2012 7:48:00 AM
very nice, welcome 2 p soup....
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Paloma Walker
Date: 9/18/2012 6:34:00 PM
P soup...haha. (sorry momentary lack of maturity on my part)
Date: 9/18/2012 7:04:00 AM
hope and hope again....great work. Welcome to poetry soup!
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Date: 9/17/2012 7:22:00 PM
awesome write keep it up thanks for sharing
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