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Hope Forlorn

Oh, hope so fragile: hope forlorn - when pain or sorrow are the yoke it seems for ages you have worn, on fumes of great dismay you choke. Each day upon your knees you pray. Oh, hope so fragile; hope forlorn. When burdens do not go away, you ask how long they must be borne. You search for the rose, but its thorn pricks your hand as you reach for it. Oh, hope so fragile; hope forlorn! You must persist. You cannot quit. Though friends you have, you’re still alone in what your own soul needs to mourn. You smile despite woes at you thrown. Oh, hope so fragile; hope forlorn. April 29, 2021 for Edward Ibeh's This Or That, Vol 2 Poetry Contest title chosen: Forlorn Hope (now edited)

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Date: 5/14/2021 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea! Had a feeling it would do well. So happy I got to read it before the contest. All the best!
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Date: 5/13/2021 4:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win Andrea, you deserve it. This is by far and to be one of the greatest poems I've ever read
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Date: 5/13/2021 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Andrea! I really loved your take on the theme. Feel free to change the title to "Hope Forlorn" now:-) Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 5/13/2021 4:56:00 PM
oops. I forgot to put on the bottom that I chose Forlorn hope as the title too. Such a dummie! yes, I will change my title now! thanks.
Date: 5/1/2021 4:57:00 AM
Hi Andrea, good to read this again, I titled mine as rhyme, coz I have slightly modified the repeating line in the last two stanzas..
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Date: 4/30/2021 10:48:00 PM
This is a lament, and so forlorn. Well done.
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Date: 4/30/2021 8:14:00 AM
Very ably penned...as always of course. Should do very well, Andrea. My very best regards -- cheers! :) john
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Date: 4/30/2021 2:10:00 AM
So many beautiful lines Andrea... Yes I agree, sometimes despite having many friends, we are still alone... as you said, if we are able to wear a smile..always.. maybe our burden will be reduced.. Best wishes in the contest... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 4/29/2021 10:45:00 PM
This is well written, Andrea:) I too wrote a Quatern on the same topic:) p.s. - if for contest, do change the title to Forlorn Hope..
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Date: 4/29/2021 9:53:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... beautifully written Andrea. A wonderful poem indeed - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 4/29/2021 4:55:00 PM
I just love this... Amazing... brilliant, beautiful. Love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/29/2021 3:48:00 PM
So true: Though friends you have, you’re still alone in what your own soul needs to mourn.// I’m experiencing that now. You can only say so much. We live in our own universe of pain but friends and kin help us know we are not alone.
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Date: 4/29/2021 3:36:00 PM
Dear Andrea, Hope is such a fragile thing, when it breaks , it is easy to feel forlorn and alone. Well written piece, winning wishes sent on the wings of a dove :)
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