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Hiku - 5/5/5 count

below the mountain slumbering sprites dream on argentine clouds

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Date: 2/28/2025 9:44:00 AM
beautiful lines:-) hugs jan xx
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Trina Layne
Date: 2/28/2025 1:08:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 2/28/2025 7:30:00 AM
Lovely haiku!
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Trina Layne
Date: 2/28/2025 1:09:00 PM
Most appreciated. Many thanks!
Date: 2/28/2025 6:43:00 AM
Awesome haiku. The movie wasn't bad either
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/28/2025 1:14:00 PM
Cheesy but watchable
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Trina Layne
Date: 2/28/2025 1:10:00 PM
Hey! I do know the movie, but I have never watched it.
Date: 2/28/2025 4:41:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Trina Layne
Date: 2/28/2025 1:10:00 PM
Thanks, Kim!

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