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Hope Floats

below the mountain 
slumbering sprites dream
on argentine clouds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Allison Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 9:44 AM
beautiful lines:-) hugs jan xx
Layne Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 1:08 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Jones Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 7:30 AM
Lovely haiku!
Layne Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 1:09 PM
Most appreciated. Many thanks!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 4:41 AM
Beautiful!
Layne Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 1:10 PM
Thanks, Kim!
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