Hope Floats

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"Ha! You silly old cetacean ..." cried Fat Seal on his berg ... "There's NO such thing as climate change!" "Of course there isn't," Orca agreed ... "You're SO much smarter than those other seals" (long since headed north) "So why aren't you chasing them, silly fool?!?" Fat Seal asked "Well, to be honest, I'm a bit lazy", replied Orca, smiling ... But patient, he mused to himself ... eyeing the shrinking ice.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2019 12:06:00 PM

ha, you said SO much with this little analogy, Greg. Splendid work! I love it.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2019 5:39:00 PM

Oh, thank you so much, Andrea, I'm really glad you liked and "got" this one, Buddy - blessings, Dear Friend! (Soup Mail coming) :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/18/2019 10:25:00 PM

Love your witty poem, Gregory. Well penned.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2019 8:52:00 PM

Many kind thanks to you, Line, I so greatly appreciate the kind words ... this was fun. Blessings! :-) <3

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/18/2019 9:03:00 PM

The last three words "eyeing the shrinking ice" made me smile. Environmentalists should be screaming from the rooftops; I am glad you are keeping us afloat here, Gregory. Good luck in the contest.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2019 8:50:00 PM

Thank you so much, Caren, I'm pleased you enjoyed it and "got" the little twist ... blessings, my friend! :-) <3