Joanna Daniel Poet Pleiades

Hope - a Pleiades

Having a positive 
     hold that keeps us going,
Helps to believe in things 
     higher than the mundane,
Hang on in faith, we've a
     home in heaven - the strong 
          hinge on which life revolves.




02/20/17

Contest: Choose your topic: Hope 
Sponsor: Russell Sivey



Form: Pleiades (Title must be one word, 7 lines of 6 syllables each, every line beginning with the same letter as the title)

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Omojevwe Emmanuel Brown March 16, 2017 at 11:07 AM Very good, congrats on your win

Afzal Nusker March 3, 2017 at 10:27 PM A wonderful example of a hopeful poem.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 24, 2017 at 8:58 PM A beautiful, inspirational write, Jo! Congrats to you!! Hugs. Rhonda

Kim Rodrigues February 24, 2017 at 8:16 PM A positive poem! Congrats, Jo!

Laura Leiser February 24, 2017 at 11:53 AM Lovely poem, Jo! Congrats :)

Joseph May February 24, 2017 at 7:02 AM Congrats on a fine win Jo

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2017 at 2:45 AM - Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann February 24, 2017 at 2:40 AM Hope is not to die, not even as the last thing there is. It must stay alive, Kai

Eve Roper February 23, 2017 at 11:32 PM Very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Sushma A. Singh February 23, 2017 at 8:39 PM Great! Congrats!!

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2017 at 7:35 PM Very nice, JO. Always you are inspirational. Congrats.

Kim Merryman February 23, 2017 at 5:29 PM Jo, awesome message! A great way of depicting hope in such a restrictive form. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim Joanna Daniel February 24, 2017 at 1:05 AM Thank you, Kim, it was tough:) all glory be to God always:)

Agnes Krampe February 23, 2017 at 5:20 PM Love the image of the hinge, Jo. Congrats on your win.

Probir Gupta February 20, 2017 at 9:49 AM Well written pleiades on 'Hope' ... GL ...