Hope

When dark clouds converge
                As cold winter plots
                To dampen the soul
                 In the face of fear
                   And adversity...

                 When crisis looms
                     And dejection
                  Flirts with despair
                     Not all is lost...

                       A swallow
                     Comes along
                       Heralding

                       The joys
                       Of spring

                         Hope!


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        Contest: Diminished Hexaverse
             Sponsor: Dr Ram Mehta
                     Placed: 7th
        Chosen POTD ~ 15th Jan 2015

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Maria Williams

Date: 5/8/2017 4:42:00 AM

Just had to come to this one Paul, seeing that a little Hope just has to be shared nowadays. It was beautiful , both in its message and design ...Maria7

Paul Callus
Date: 5/9/2017 10:35:00 AM

I'm glad you decided to stop and read, Maria; thank you for liking and for the high rating. Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/5/2016 12:01:00 AM

The tiniest messenger with the biggest message. Really dig this format ... I ought to try it someday. You did very well here, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/6/2016 10:46:00 AM

Thank you Timothy. I have only written a couple of poems in this form, which is quite handy to use. ~ Regards // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/12/2015 1:44:00 AM

I love the way you deliver your message Pual. Philosophy wrapped in poetic language. Perfect! hugs!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/12/2015 4:50:00 PM

And I love your lovely feedback, Kim! Thank you, a lot:) hugs // paul

Leon Enriquez

Date: 3/31/2015 8:38:00 AM

Dear Paul: Well done. Leon

Paul Callus
Date: 3/31/2015 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Leon; it's so nice to have you visiting. Hope you're keeping well. Take care. // paul

Julia Ward

Date: 3/9/2015 5:56:00 AM

Is it a hard form of poetry to compose? You have done very well. Hugs, Julia, xx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/9/2015 8:47:00 AM

Thank you Julia; glad you liked it. No, it is not hard at all; do try it, I'm sure you'll enjoy it. Hugs // paul

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 3/5/2015 12:52:00 PM

What a clean getaway from any negativity this poem philosophical and bright, is encouraging.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/5/2015 3:44:00 PM

Hi Iris! Lovely to have you stopping by; thank you for the insightful comments...I appreciate. All the best. // paul

Angie Thomas

Date: 2/16/2015 3:02:00 AM

Hope... The ray of light at the end of a dark tunnel... =) loved this write, and my very belated congratulations on having this as poem of the day... Truly deserving... A definite seven =)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/16/2015 3:50:00 PM

Many thanks Angie. Love your insightful comments...and appreciate the high rating and congrats. All the best. hugs // paul

Angie Thomas
Date: 2/16/2015 3:04:00 AM

"And dejection flirts with despair" my absolute favourite line!! =)

Arlene Smith

Date: 2/15/2015 2:06:00 PM

What a wonderfully beautiful reminder, that our storms will always pass... I see it was POTD.. Well done, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2015 2:23:00 PM

I'm so pleased that you found this poem to your liking, Arlene. Thank you for stopping by with lovely and insightful comments. hugs // paul

Tammy Reams

Date: 2/5/2015 5:42:00 AM

I love this write! I will look for the swallow everyday.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/5/2015 1:08:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by, Tammy! Hope swallows will always fly your way with messages of hope. // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/23/2015 12:18:00 PM

I know I read this one before, Paul, but I went through the comments and kind find one from me. Oh well, maybe I read it and didn't have time to comment...it's wonderful to read this beauty again...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/23/2015 2:01:00 PM

sorry, can't not kind...my auto correct isn't always correct.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/23/2015 1:08:00 PM

I'm so pleased that you found beauty in this humble poem of mine, Rhonda! Thank you for revisiting:) A lovely weekend to you! hugs // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/22/2015 12:13:00 AM

Congrats Paul de Great, I am happy to see this excellent Poem on top...huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 1/22/2015 1:37:00 PM

Thank you Kayode; I notice that even your entry is on the winners' list...well done! // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/21/2015 7:10:00 AM

I see this was POTD, congrats Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2015 10:07:00 AM

Thank you Richard; POTD gave more satisfaction than the actual contest result!:) // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2015 4:24:00 PM

!!! ((())) Way to go ……Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2015 10:06:00 AM

Thank you Sara! Felt sorry for your entry....somebody forgot to flick the turbo switch!!:) // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/20/2015 11:16:00 AM

Congratulations Paul> love and Regards rajat

Paul Callus
Date: 1/20/2015 12:10:00 PM

Thank you Rajat! Best regards to you too! // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/20/2015 3:21:00 AM

Did i miss commenting on this one... ohhh.. but i so remember that i like how you use the word flirt in the second stanza... :) congrats Paul muffins on the way.. !!:D-'olive eloisa

Paul Callus
Date: 1/20/2015 10:38:00 AM

Thank you for coming back with congrats Olive_eloi!!:) I can just smell those muffins....mmmmm:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/20/2015 3:15:00 AM

Did i miss commenting on this one... ohhh.. but i so remember that i like how you use the word flirt in the second stanza... :) congrats Paul muffins on the way.. !!:D-'olive eloisa

Paul Callus
Date: 1/20/2015 10:39:00 AM

:):):):):):

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/19/2015 10:37:00 PM

Oh wow Paul,, love the second stanza the most of the wholesome awesome write ! Perfectly crafted that deserves a 7 beyond doubts!Congrats on fine win!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/20/2015 10:41:00 AM

Many thanks Upma! I see that you too like the "flirting stanza":) All the best. // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/19/2015 5:29:00 PM

Paul, stopping back to give you my congratulations on your win for your lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 1/20/2015 10:36:00 AM

Thank you Sandra. I was very impressed with your half full/empty glass reasoning! hugs // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2015 12:39:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) Hugs Jan x

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2015 3:05:00 PM

cup of tea here with me and a packet of mini cheesy cheddar biscuits :-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 1/19/2015 3:02:00 PM

Thank you Jan. Been out playing badminton and just returned; am enjoying a nice hot black coffee and a piece of dark chocolate:) hugs //paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/19/2015 11:15:00 AM

Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for the participation

Paul Callus
Date: 1/19/2015 2:59:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Very pleased to figure once again on your winners' list. All the best. // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 1/19/2015 10:23:00 AM

I long to hear the swallow! Congratulations on your win Paul and I love your take hope.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/19/2015 10:36:00 AM

Thank you Brenda! I'm pleased that you like it. Did not know that the results were out; will now go and have a look. Have a lovely week:) // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/17/2015 11:23:00 AM

Dear Paul, it seems winter is often associated with life's hardships. Spring, however, is never far behind and it's important to keep hope in our hearts. Really enjoyed the way the swallow herald spring. Here it is the robin that does the same. Excellent write and I wish you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2015 4:29:00 PM

Hi dear Carolyn! So lovely to see you!:) Missed your presence! Winter always dampens my spirits, even if I pretend it doesn't; when it's cold I don't function as well as I would like to, so I yearn for warmer spring/summer days to arrive. Over here the robins come in autumn; in spring they depart and return home. Will be in touch. love and hugs ..... paul