Hope

Some divine light
Beams upon my life

Every day the same sight:
A star beyond shallow sky,

Would I see you if I die?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 12:30 PM
Short, descriptive phrases and colourful images. An apt title... a beautiful piece! BRAVO my friend!!
Brown Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:42 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol
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June 17, 2012 at 4:26 PM
LW,;-) congratulations with your wonderful win in my contest~ take care and have yourself a wonderful Fathers Day,~ xox~PD
Fisher Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 1:55 PM
Many congrats on your feature this week - rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 5:48 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lukasz. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 8:25 PM
Congrats...lovely read
Grisetti Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 7:47 AM
A beautiful poem and well deserved winner.
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April 11, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Congratulations, Lukasz, on your win with these poignant lines! Blessings, Rhonda
Sweetheart Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 1:21 PM
congrats on a super write and win luv..
Brown Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "UPTO ELEVEN" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol
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April 11, 2012 at 3:41 AM
Ahhh, Lukasz, so touching and warm!!! Congratulations on your win!!! Big Huggsss,love deb
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April 9, 2012 at 4:23 PM
Well written Lukasz. - oxox Anne-Lise
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