Hope

Some divine light Beams upon my life Every day the same sight: A star beyond shallow sky, Would I see you if I die?

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Date: 7/4/2012 12:30:00 PM

Short, descriptive phrases and colourful images. An apt title... a beautiful piece! BRAVO my friend!!

Date: 6/18/2012 11:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol

Date: 6/17/2012 4:26:00 PM

LW,;-) congratulations with your wonderful win in my contest~ take care and have yourself a wonderful Fathers Day,~ xox~PD

Date: 4/17/2012 1:55:00 PM

Many congrats on your feature this week - rgds Janette

Date: 4/17/2012 5:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lukasz. Love, Carol

Date: 4/16/2012 8:25:00 PM

Congrats...lovely read

Date: 4/12/2012 7:47:00 AM

A beautiful poem and well deserved winner.

Date: 4/11/2012 5:34:00 PM

Congratulations, Lukasz, on your win with these poignant lines! Blessings, Rhonda

Date: 4/11/2012 1:21:00 PM

congrats on a super write and win luv..

Date: 4/11/2012 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "UPTO ELEVEN" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol

Date: 4/11/2012 3:41:00 AM

Ahhh, Lukasz, so touching and warm!!! Congratulations on your win!!! Big Huggsss,love deb

Date: 4/9/2012 4:23:00 PM

Well written Lukasz. - oxox Anne-Lise