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July 3, 2023

Contest : Writing Challenge - H Words

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Surging storm swarms in the shattered sky Traces the tormenting terror in the frantic air The whispering wind of joy knows not why It should face the ruthless turbulence of despair. Afflicting anger flares up in the spiteful mind Smolders the sullen life to form extant ember The anguished ashes fly away, failing to find solace of hope, the heart doesn’t remember. Harrowing haze clutches the hidden horizon Spreads the shroud of gloom in the atmosphere Cotton clouds drift away from veiled sun’s apron Hoping from the darkness a bright day will appear. Seething sorrow simmers in the marooned mind Permeates pain in heart plunged deep in misery Divine touch illumines the soul, agony rescinds Sedate hope weaves bliss in blessed life’s tapestry.

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Date: 7/21/2023 2:03:00 PM
Subimal, beautifully penned as usual and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge H Words !
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Date: 7/7/2023 3:59:00 PM
excellent ink Subimal and i love your use of alliteration, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/10/2023 10:02:00 PM
Thank you, Jan for your visit and for encouraging comments.
Date: 7/4/2023 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Enjoyed It. Have a blessed/great day.................
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/10/2023 10:02:00 PM
Thank you, Paula.
Date: 7/4/2023 6:08:00 AM
- Hope means so much ... and we all have different hopes ... a well-described poem .... you say most of it in the last line, Subimal ... congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/10/2023 10:01:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise for liking the poem.

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