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In times of plight I seek for you, When rivers freeze and left are few, While sorrow strikes, among the meek, O’er the winds, and under the creeks, It's you who then I wish to seek. Mirth adorned in your silhouette, In times of war, all when stale and vain, The picture of you, is tainted coaled, Relinquishing my soul, from the cold, I seek to weld, our belted bond. While the willow, in her bow'r sleeps, drooping to the sunset steep, like silver pellets along my chest; they pierce through and caress, At times like these, you seek for me. Forward, Unfazed; Not a moment to waste! I long to bask in your estate, Of short and glorious, evanescence! I've come to seek, your essence! 18/8/19 Edward Ibeh I Believe- Era

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Date: 9/9/2019 6:39:00 PM
I enjoyed your expressionism vey much. Well written.
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Date: 8/27/2019 10:11:00 AM
This is so well said glorious evanescence rhyming with essence, your word selection eg bask in your estate, wonderful thoughts, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 8/21/2019 10:29:00 PM
This is stunning. There are many lines I love! Congrats on your super win. Jeanne
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Carmael William
Date: 8/30/2019 10:41:00 PM
Thank you jeanne!
Date: 8/20/2019 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem, Carmael!:-)
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Carmael William
Date: 8/20/2019 11:47:00 PM
Thank you so much ..i enjoyed myself taking part in the contest!
Date: 8/18/2019 6:08:00 PM
Hello Carmael William, This is a poem of strength. So nice to meet you. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Carmael William
Date: 8/18/2019 8:50:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words . Its nice to have met you too.. Hope you have a wonderful day ahead as well
Date: 8/18/2019 11:49:00 AM
Wow...I like this...
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Carmael William
Date: 8/18/2019 8:50:00 PM
Thank you!

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