Hope

Lonely, alone and sad
I am on the verge of going mad
I know this phase will pass
There’s still water in the glass
I will live, I will fight, I will survive 
Thank you all for helping me to revive
Beamed upon by your love and blessings 
I am happy, the clouds are disappearing 




- i am just going through a bad stage, all alone for a job training in an unknown place and someone broke my heart too. Clichéd.
'there's still water in the glass' means that the optimistic view of a glass being half full. :).
Please do comment.  Thanks.

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Beata Agustin

September 10, 2024 at 9:26 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Sylvia Coulstock

June 16, 2018 at 7:37 AM

I am sorry for what you’re going through but I am impressed by your positiveness as shown in the third line of this very good poem.I’m also glad your’re able to express your feelings which will help with your healing.The sad times in life can be beneficial to us poets.Good luck with everything and use everything to your advantage in writing as you have done here.

Arturo Michael

June 9, 2018 at 9:16 AM

You certainly still have a positive outlook despite the tears...Nice write Sayonara...All the best

Mark Toney

June 8, 2018 at 11:30 PM

Very powerful, positive message, Sayonara Oyasumi. Nice line "I will live, I will fight, I will survive." We look forward to reading more from you. Cheers!