Hope

Lonely, alone and sad I am on the verge of going mad I know this phase will pass There’s still water in the glass I will live, I will fight, I will survive Thank you all for helping me to revive Beamed upon by your love and blessings I am happy, the clouds are disappearing - i am just going through a bad stage, all alone for a job training in an unknown place and someone broke my heart too. Clichéd. 'there's still water in the glass' means that the optimistic view of a glass being half full. :). Please do comment. Thanks.

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Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 6/16/2018 7:37:00 AM

I am sorry for what you’re going through but I am impressed by your positiveness as shown in the third line of this very good poem.I’m also glad your’re able to express your feelings which will help with your healing.The sad times in life can be beneficial to us poets.Good luck with everything and use everything to your advantage in writing as you have done here.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/9/2018 9:16:00 AM

You certainly still have a positive outlook despite the tears...Nice write Sayonara...All the best

Mark Toney

Date: 6/8/2018 11:30:00 PM

Very powerful, positive message, Sayonara Oyasumi. Nice line "I will live, I will fight, I will survive." We look forward to reading more from you. Cheers!

Paris-Maree Boreham

Date: 6/8/2018 12:23:00 PM

I'm happy your happy, Thank you for sharing <3

Sayonara Oyasumi
Date: 6/8/2018 12:39:00 PM

Thank you for supporting. :)