Hoops

Whatta bunch of friends I have here on the Soup You guys are the best, you make me happy as poop A day without poetry Is a day wasted totally Feel like skipping like a fairy through hoops

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/31/2017 8:29:00 AM

Tiny Tim tiptoed through tulips//Jack just juggles gin juleps//silly old words//flock of birds//Reminds me of Maggie MacGillips. SKIP ON JACKSON!!! (maggie who?)

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/31/2017 9:05:00 AM

Where have I heard that name before? Wasn't she a famous porn star? Not that I would know the name of a porn star! Their image yes!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/31/2017 6:36:00 AM

Check out my Limerick that I wrote about "My Dog Spot," quite funny and fun! You will like it!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/31/2017 6:56:00 AM

I've checked it out... YEEEEEE HAWWWWWWWW!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/31/2017 6:27:00 AM

Ha! You crack me up my friend! You just had to enter the word poop into a poem this morning didn't you? You can't resist that! What a stunning piece, I enjoyed reading it this morning! Quite the fabulous poem Jack, fun! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/31/2017 6:29:00 AM

The poop thing is my job... mustn't get too serious! LOL