Hooked on Bali

This sailor loves his Bali hook

I know the aches and pains it took

I flashed the mirror for a check

I found a treasure round my neck

So let me thank you for this gift

You gave my humble heart a lift

I crave the sand between my toes 

In Bali where the sunset goes




My review sent to Bali for my hand carved necklace.
The hook represents a love and connection to the sea.
Each necklace sold helps save the Coral Triangle. 
How cool is that?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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