Wendy Watson Poet Sijo

Hooked

Escapism beside the water’s edge, as misty dawn awakes 
Great crested grebes, dressed to impress, elegantly pass me by ~ 
I took the bait – gullibly distracted from encroaching on their morning feast.


15.10.19
F F I series 29 sijo  - Brian Strand

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Mark Toney October 16, 2019 at 12:37 PM Wendy, your beautiful words paint a lovely scene. Your theme "Hooked" and phrase "I took the bait" is very clever. And because of your poem I now know what a grebe is! Cheers!

Constance La France October 15, 2019 at 9:34 PM Wendy, wonderful and congrats on your placement with Brian in his blog series !