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Hooked

Escapism beside the water’s edge, as misty dawn awakes Great crested grebes, dressed to impress, elegantly pass me by ~ I took the bait – gullibly distracted from encroaching on their morning feast. 15.10.19 F F I series 29 sijo - Brian Strand

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Date: 10/16/2019 12:37:00 PM
Wendy, your beautiful words paint a lovely scene. Your theme "Hooked" and phrase "I took the bait" is very clever. And because of your poem I now know what a grebe is! Cheers!
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:34:00 PM
Wendy, wonderful and congrats on your placement with Brian in his blog series !
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