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Hoof Beats

Hoof beats has shattered our silence bringing forth unspeakable violence death riding the very air coming soon if not already there guns and bombs in foreign lands sold from our side to wicked hands soon they'll return to our own land with wicked returns, guns in our hands when will they teach of Ghandi or Martin Luther King have they made a vow never to turn the other cheek if they can not learn from India or even hear the words of God their fortune is misfortune and oh so terrible a fate why can't there be peace there must they threaten violence everywhere why do those who speak peace even dare speak peace to those who do not care the vengeful, the robbed those who dare to question God blinded by hatred so thick it clouds the mind with happy thoughts of vengeance hatred fueled by love the most powerful thing on earth death is arriving in the very air hoof beats of horseman silent snare

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Date: 6/5/2009 12:30:00 PM
Only the virtuous shall teach righteousness ... it is our mission to tell and tell and tell again ... and you shall wear a crown for it . Well done!
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Date: 5/21/2009 8:03:00 AM
Gosh, this is powerfully depressing. Great write, sad truth. This is not a happy thought. Incredible poem John! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/20/2009 8:53:00 PM
John, this poetic piece is packed full of vivid images and sadness throughout and so much truth, a sad truth unfortnuately. I do pray for such a day when we can all love and stop the hatred. Afterall, love makes the world go around! Always a joy to read your talented work good friend. Thank you for your comments on my work, always apprecaited.
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Date: 5/20/2009 8:20:00 PM
Professional projection John, once more you amaze me. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement. Love reading your mind.-AA
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Date: 5/20/2009 4:39:00 PM
what you wrote here is a jem and so true,our lands are being destructed by weapons we ve created,and regarding Martin luther king,im in love with that man,he s not history to me,he still lives--bravo my friend--charma
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Date: 5/20/2009 4:11:00 PM
Isn't it ironic how the guns and other weapons we sell to other nations could easily be used against us. Very astute observation in a well-penned poem, John! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2009 4:05:00 PM
Awesome write here John! Good imagery. - jeremmiah
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