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Hood

Mom U always raised a storm When I did something wrong Those blowings made me strong They stood Me good Thank u mom for providing a hood Gave me what u believed was right Ill care for u with all my might Raised me in a manner Saw me through your scanner Made strong helped me when I needed u most To u I raise a toast Ur the finest mother I can claim and boast U tried to tell me all good things I’ve tied them in my mind with strings You are so compassionate Thank you for making me passionate To reach the sky And never give up or stop to ask why Sorry for annoying u so often I know I need to soften U too need to control your anxiety Spend more time with all mighty Try to lend me an ear Whenever I hold a fear Till im on this universe May god not show wrath or curse As now u need love n care My joys with u I want to share Without u my life would be empty and meaningless As without my mentor I‘ll end up with uncurable stress So please take care As I need u here! Love u mom Please be a little more warm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/19/2016 9:30:00 PM
this is a deep write. LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 3:06:00 PM
AMBER, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 6/24/2009 1:19:00 AM
this is oozing wiyh love n smacks of want of more love its heart felt n simple!
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Date: 6/9/2009 3:43:00 PM
momma's gonna love this. jhlovingiii
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Date: 6/8/2009 12:59:00 PM
aww a beautiful poem so full of devotion, a mothers love should be warm and welcoming, we all are not perfect, I do my best for my children and I know I can do more and hope I get there and achive it so they know love is unconditional, my mother left home when I was 11 and I lived with my dad, you never too old for a hug so just ask her and see what happenes just say mum can I have a hug please, I dont recall getting many hugs so go for it , God bless you from diane
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