Hood

Mom
U always raised a storm
When I did something wrong
Those blowings made me strong
They stood
 Me good 
Thank u mom for providing a   hood
Gave me what u believed was right 
Ill care for u with all my might
Raised me in a manner
Saw me through your scanner
Made strong helped me when I needed u most 
To u I raise a toast
Ur the finest mother I can claim and boast
U tried to tell   me all good things 
I’ve tied them in my mind with strings
You are so compassionate
Thank you for making me passionate
To reach the sky
And never give up or stop to ask why

Sorry for annoying u so often
I know I need to soften
U too need to control your anxiety
Spend more time with all mighty
Try to lend me an ear 
Whenever I hold a fear
Till im on this universe 
May god not show wrath or curse 
As now u need love n care 
My joys with u I want to share
Without u my life would be empty and meaningless
As without my mentor I‘ll end up with uncurable stress
So please take care
As I need u here!
Love u mom 
Please be a little more warm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 11:14 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 9:30 PM
this is a deep write. LINDA
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 3:06 PM
AMBER, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Talwar Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 1:19 AM
this is oozing wiyh love n smacks of want of more love its heart felt n simple!
Loving Iii Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 3:43 PM
momma's gonna love this. jhlovingiii
Christian Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 12:59 PM
aww a beautiful poem so full of devotion, a mothers love should be warm and welcoming, we all are not perfect, I do my best for my children and I know I can do more and hope I get there and achive it so they know love is unconditional, my mother left home when I was 11 and I lived with my dad, you never too old for a hug so just ask her and see what happenes just say mum can I have a hug please, I dont recall getting many hugs so go for it , God bless you from diane
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