Hoo Noo

I met a girl in Cibecue
Who did not quite know what to do
Then down by the river
She turned Indian-giver
And I ended up with the flu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 6:39 PM
Hello Rico Leffanta, i like your poem. It is cute. Te guy in your poem. This guy in your poem,should not have dated this girl when she was sick. Now he will be sick. Have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 2:44 PM
Thanks for telling me Rico Leffanta. Have a nice day my friend.
Leffanta Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Any nurse can tell you pheromones are not deterred by sickness. Mahalo nui loa, Darlene. Aloha! Rico
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