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Honorable Mention

When just a child the poet's mom said "Son
Throughout your life beware the sin of pride
Remember this when every day is done
What counts the most is who you are inside"

At first he thought his mother's words unfair
For recognition surely has its place
In time he witnessed prideful thoughts can flare
When undue adulation supplants grace

The poet took to heart his mother's words
Too many accolades can turn your head
Vainglory flits away on wings of birds
What's left is mostly emptiness and dread

Life immersed in modest exhibition
Satisfied with honorable mention
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Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 4:13 PM
Delightful words of wisdom, Mark.
Toney Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 8:29 PM
What's funny is I came up with this poem after having not placed in several contests but receiving honorable mention. The poem started to take shape while I was licking my wounds trying to come up with a reason why. I decided honorable mention wasn't so bad! ~Mark
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Pearls of wisdom penned here, Mark! Superb! Cheers, Gershon
Toney Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 9:07 PM
Gershon, thank you so much! It’s always good to hear from you. ~Mark
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