Honeymoon

his rogering scrutiny —
the sexy satin clings to 
shape of his buxomly wife
begging to be shed

10/10/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rigoler Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Very graphic, Kim, and not far from the truth. Thanks for the stop by. BTW, when one's virginity is lost, nothing will bring it back. Life is a hard experience. / M
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:22 PM
LOL! Yes, I know. Unfortunately mine was “taken”
Green Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Loved this one Kim. In just a few words you manage to paint the most beautiful picture.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Thank you, dear Chris!
Kiser Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 6:26 AM
Beautifully penned; great imagery in this one. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 8:32 AM
Thank you, M.L.!
Bangalee Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 12:05 AM
buxomly wife!/// oh!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 8:31 AM
LOL!
Gauthier Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 9:02 PM
Very cute, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Thanks, Line!
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