Honeymoon

his rogering scrutiny — the sexy satin clings to shape of his buxomly wife begging to be shed 10/10/2018

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 10/12/2018 9:16:00 PM

Very graphic, Kim, and not far from the truth. Thanks for the stop by. BTW, when one's virginity is lost, nothing will bring it back. Life is a hard experience. / M

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2018 9:22:00 PM

LOL! Yes, I know. Unfortunately mine was “taken”

Chris Green

Date: 10/11/2018 9:57:00 AM

Loved this one Kim. In just a few words you manage to paint the most beautiful picture.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2018 9:59:00 AM

Thank you, dear Chris!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/11/2018 6:26:00 AM

Beautifully penned; great imagery in this one. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2018 8:32:00 AM

Thank you, M.L.!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/11/2018 12:05:00 AM

buxomly wife!/// oh!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2018 8:31:00 AM

LOL!

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/10/2018 9:02:00 PM

Very cute, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2018 9:04:00 PM

Thanks, Line!