Honeyed Days On a Hill

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My favorite place, is on a knoll above the meadow, Under a dogwood tree, wrens flying in the dayglow, Reading, picnicking, or enjoying the midday snooze, Or seizing upon canvas, the butterscotch and blues. Gay blooms crowd the summer, to daydreams' delight, And butterflies roam so slowly, towards moonlight! Bronzed days are lustrous, in a precint of silence- The sun rose blush at dawn, and it hasn't set since!

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/11/2021 12:04:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, The placed that you described sounds lovely. And the colors are vivid and inviting. Can I come? Best wishes in the in the contest:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/11/2021 3:38:00 PM

Of course you can come, Alexis! I was hoping you'd ask. I'm so glad you delighted in the scenery. Thank you very much for the warm, sunny comment. Blessings, Evelyn :D

Silent One

Date: 4/11/2021 11:13:00 AM

This sounds lovely... You always make things so vivid ..

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/11/2021 11:23:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One. Your words touch my heart. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/11/2021 10:06:00 AM

The scenery you depict is always of the highest standard.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/11/2021 11:21:00 AM

Thank you for your very kind observation. :D

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/10/2021 10:01:00 PM

Ah, the imagery...magnificent, Evelyn. Made me feel so peaceful. I need to find a place like this...hard to do in the city and the suburbs.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/10/2021 10:26:00 PM

I'm so glad that peaceful images were evoked for you, L Milton. Most people like a tranquil getaway now and then. Thank you for your kind expressions of appreciation. :)