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Honey To a Spoon

the night sky wavers in your frosted light
imaginings of ever after cling like honey to a spoon.
you face the earth as sister, smiling coyly
from the cratered depth of dimpled cheek and chin.

edged in the kohl of Cleopatra’s line
your brows appear to question even starlight
your oceanic orbs dry of tears still twinkle
in the remnant asteroid powder of eons past.

beauteous Luna purse not your lips
let reflections of a brighter hue let glide 
across your roman countenance so bold
and teach the fiery sun of catered glory
for it is you who rule when day is done.


*dedicated to my muse Rhonda!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 11:06 PM
Debs, when I really want to KNOW something, I go all out!! (referencing your comment to me on drunken pen) So I accomplished what takes some years to do? Awesome!!! hahaha. Luv ya, Andrea
Brown Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 8:20 AM
I am stopping by your poetry to thank you for your kind comments on my writing. It has been a pleasure to read yours today Debbie. Love, Carol
Hunter Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Beautiful! Your poetry is something else, Debbie. I'm a fan!
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 5:44 PM
oooh, love it: you who rule when day is done!!! My muse rules that way too! soupmail
Grisetti Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 2:15 PM
I do agree with the scribe - this is very well worded. Sometimes I think I just use the same dozen words and search for a different one. You seem to have them all right there.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 1:45 PM
Wow, this is an amazing write Debbie! I'm happy to be your muse anytime. Thanks for the dedication. You always inspire me with your breathtaking poetry. Blessings and Love, Rhonda
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