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Honey Suckle Candy Kiss

Honey suckle candy kiss

Soaring towards heaven

State of bliss

Touching you

Heaven in palm of my hand

Falling like Alice in wonder land

Essence of you

Grips me tight

Marshmallow comfort

In your hold

Our love is young

And also old

I dreamt  of you

Since time began

Our souls entwined

Love birds sang

You are and always eternally

The life and breath

Engulfed in me!


Happy Valentine's to all soupers!!!

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Sami Helbaoui

Date: 2/22/2011 5:46:00 AM

Si estoy estudiando espanol... es que naci en Madrid pero ahora vivo en Syria... Crea que voy a una universidad en Espana...:P Perdoname que hasta ahora estoy comentando pero soy nuevo..:P Me gusta mucho su rima. Gracias, Sami

John Rhinem

Date: 2/14/2011 2:28:00 PM

S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```S*I*M*O*N*E S*E*G*A*L¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2011 12:25:00 PM

Oh so yummy Simone and oh so good to see u here on Soup again... miss u much my friend.. all is wonderful with us and hope u are enjoying sweet success in your fantastic career ... how is weather in Spain??? now I feel like Alice in Wonderland in the most delightful way luv.. ..haha..Happy Valentine's Day ..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2011 11:01:00 AM

Love your upbeat, romantic verse, Simone. Happy Valentine's Day to you as well! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2011 9:42:00 AM

Thank you!! Great work!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/14/2011 9:33:00 AM

Nice sweet wording for a submission on Valentine's Day.

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/14/2011 9:31:00 AM

i love your name simone. this was a very good read, very beautifull. john h loving iii