Simone Segal Poet Rhyme

Honey Suckle Candy Kiss

Honey suckle candy kiss

Soaring towards heaven

State of bliss

Touching you

Heaven in palm of my hand

Falling like Alice in wonder land

Essence of you

Grips me tight

Tranquility light

Marshmallow comfort

In your hold

Our love is young

And also old

I dreamt  of you

Since time began

Our souls entwined

Love birds sang

You are and always eternally

The life and breath

Engulfed in me

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Latisha Pennywell February 18, 2010 at 9:19 PM This is a great poem! Also thanks for the comment its greatly appreciated!

Ravindra K Kapoor February 15, 2010 at 9:06 AM Superb beauty and melody in your excellent poem Simone. It’s a heart touching one dipped with powerful feelings, emotions and love. Sorry I could not read it earlier. Thanks and many thanks for your ever precious comments with a wonderful gift of the video sight. Hope I would get success in opening the video play soon, to see your wonderful gift my friend. till then with best wishes and love Ravindra ......... Simone S

Sara Kendrick January 23, 2010 at 1:07 PM Very romantic write in this one. Keep the romantic pen flowing. Sara

Billy Thekidster January 15, 2010 at 11:48 PM Knock Knock Simone. Anybody home? Haven't seen or heard from you for awhile. In your absence I continue to enjoy your poetic style. Great Piece Simone. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Doris Culverhouse December 17, 2009 at 3:55 PM honey suckle kiss? I like that idea!! good one.

Bryan Bolton December 9, 2009 at 5:33 PM This was really good and reminded me of what I thought I had and hope some day I will - thank You for Sharing

L'Nass Shango December 7, 2009 at 1:42 PM Honeysuckle is my favorite flower ... I am still probing all your metaphors

Kabuteng P.Ink K. December 7, 2009 at 7:15 AM Blissful is right--& so sweet! Such a treat to read :)

Prince Freakasso December 3, 2009 at 12:09 AM Honey suckle that little bird.Although tiny,can yet be heard.Nice work Simone.The sweetness of your poem lingers on.Keep writing....PRINCE

Tobey Hill December 2, 2009 at 6:24 AM AAAHHHH LOVE........TAH

Izzy Gumbo November 27, 2009 at 8:15 AM Yes, I'd like one of those Marshmallow please... lol wow your writing is dreamy. :)

John Loving Iii November 19, 2009 at 6:41 PM all for a piece of candy? jhl

Brian Anderson November 17, 2009 at 1:21 PM makes the reader want to fall in love. i like your style of expression.

Ts Lewis November 16, 2009 at 6:09 AM Our love is young And also old Beautifully done.

James Fraser November 14, 2009 at 2:00 PM Simone, what a beautiful poem > full of passion, emotion, love delightfulness > and its heading to my favs >> James

P Sheart November 14, 2009 at 11:00 AM Hi Simone Such a beautiful poetic write. Love the meter and easy natural flow. Truly enjoyed! Thanks for sharing, smile. Love Light Patty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 13, 2009 at 2:48 PM Lovely poetic flow on a lovely subject... very uplifting and lilting... thankxxx for sharing and for reading my poetry and commenting today... luv... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"

Moonbee Canady November 12, 2009 at 10:47 PM Very Nice, Upbeat, Cheery, Could Sing This One (smile) ... Good Flow, Pleasureable Words ... Excellent Write ... MoonBee

Carol Sunshine Brown November 12, 2009 at 4:45 PM I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Simone. Love, Carol