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Honey Suckle Candy Kiss

Honey suckle candy kiss

Soaring towards heaven

State of bliss

Touching you

Heaven in palm of my hand

Falling like Alice in wonder land

Essence of you

Grips me tight

Tranquility light

Marshmallow comfort

In your hold

Our love is young

And also old

I dreamt  of you

Since time began

Our souls entwined

Love birds sang

You are and always eternally

The life and breath

Engulfed in me

loverhyme

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Latisha Pennywell

Date: 2/18/2010 9:19:00 PM

This is a great poem! Also thanks for the comment its greatly appreciated!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 2/15/2010 9:06:00 AM

Superb beauty and melody in your excellent poem Simone. It’s a heart touching one dipped with powerful feelings, emotions and love. Sorry I could not read it earlier. Thanks and many thanks for your ever precious comments with a wonderful gift of the video sight. Hope I would get success in opening the video play soon, to see your wonderful gift my friend. till then with best wishes and love Ravindra ......... Simone S

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2010 1:07:00 PM

Very romantic write in this one. Keep the romantic pen flowing. Sara

Billy Thekidster

Date: 1/15/2010 11:48:00 PM

Knock Knock Simone. Anybody home? Haven't seen or heard from you for awhile. In your absence I continue to enjoy your poetic style. Great Piece Simone. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/17/2009 3:55:00 PM

honey suckle kiss? I like that idea!! good one.

Bryan Bolton

Date: 12/9/2009 5:33:00 PM

This was really good and reminded me of what I thought I had and hope some day I will - thank You for Sharing

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/7/2009 1:42:00 PM

Honeysuckle is my favorite flower ... I am still probing all your metaphors

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/7/2009 7:15:00 AM

Blissful is right--& so sweet! Such a treat to read :)

Prince Freakasso

Date: 12/3/2009 12:09:00 AM

Honey suckle that little bird.Although tiny,can yet be heard.Nice work Simone.The sweetness of your poem lingers on.Keep writing....PRINCE

Tobey Hill

Date: 12/2/2009 6:24:00 AM

AAAHHHH LOVE........TAH

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/27/2009 8:15:00 AM

Yes, I'd like one of those Marshmallow please... lol wow your writing is dreamy. :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/19/2009 6:41:00 PM

all for a piece of candy? jhl

Brian Anderson

Date: 11/17/2009 1:21:00 PM

makes the reader want to fall in love. i like your style of expression.

Ts Lewis

Date: 11/16/2009 6:09:00 AM

Our love is young And also old Beautifully done.

James Fraser

Date: 11/14/2009 2:00:00 PM

Simone, what a beautiful poem > full of passion, emotion, love delightfulness > and its heading to my favs >> James

P Sheart

Date: 11/14/2009 11:00:00 AM

Hi Simone Such a beautiful poetic write. Love the meter and easy natural flow. Truly enjoyed! Thanks for sharing, smile. Love Light Patty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2009 2:48:00 PM

Lovely poetic flow on a lovely subject... very uplifting and lilting... thankxxx for sharing and for reading my poetry and commenting today... luv... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"

Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/12/2009 10:47:00 PM

Very Nice, Upbeat, Cheery, Could Sing This One (smile) ... Good Flow, Pleasureable Words ... Excellent Write ... MoonBee

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/12/2009 4:45:00 PM

I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Simone. Love, Carol