Honey Plans

nor’easter skies, contemplate,
but my honey plans
to catch a flight

almost forgets his meeting
thinking about his airplane seating

traffic not in the Bostonian plan
speeds things up all he can

he’s made his gate...ready to load
sign changes to delay in bold

another call to his spouse’s cell
after another delay...ain’t that swell

he finally arrives after midnight hour
perhaps she’s waiting with only a flower

are you kidding me, folks,
i’m quite tired...stumble off to bed,
after leaning in with a kiss.
this is wedded bliss ;)

10/17/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 10/20/2019 7:11:00 AM
Airports are an otherworldly environment. A place between here and there, heaven and earth. You penned it well in that poem. It is good that people from time to time reach their destination.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2019 7:25:00 AM
For sure! Thanks, Kurt!
Date: 10/19/2019 2:09:00 PM
so cute, like eavesdropping in on your marraige!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2019 4:34:00 PM
LOL...thanks :)
Date: 10/17/2019 10:58:00 PM
I really like this, Kim. It leads the reader on--to a realistic ending! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2019 7:14:00 AM
Thanks so much, Janice! Hugs...Kim
Date: 10/17/2019 8:50:00 PM
and this is an adorable poem....the bad weather can inspire beautiful poems at least, then seal them with a kiss :) hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2019 8:51:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra :)
Date: 10/17/2019 5:20:00 PM
Nice poem about a loved one here! I have been delayed on flights and it is no fun. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Matthew!
Date: 10/17/2019 2:01:00 PM
Ha, ha! Love the whole thing, esp. the end---but not just the end. Preciously penned! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon!
Date: 10/17/2019 12:58:00 PM
In his defence Kim, a touch of jetlag perhaps lol.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2019 12:59:00 PM
No, he was awake...I was tired...lol
Date: 10/17/2019 11:26:00 AM
That sounds about right to me. : ) Funny Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2019 11:34:00 AM
Thanks, Chris! :):)
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