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Honey Life

honey in the hive our pollinator of life mighty little Bee 6-17-2019 haiku 5, 7, 5 Birds and Bees checked it on Poetry Soup syllable counter

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/3/2019 8:25:00 PM

Mighty good one, Jeanne! Nice haiku. Best wishes, Gershon

Constance La France

Date: 6/25/2019 9:35:00 AM

Jeanne, nicely done !

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/25/2019 11:10:00 AM

Well, I thought I had taken care of that! but no, you are right it was still off. My bad. Thanks for the date reminder. I should just get in the habit of that!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/24/2019 10:55:00 AM

Good haiku. Well done.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/24/2019 6:48:00 PM

I do love to try more simple forms since I tend to run on sometimes. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/22/2019 10:37:00 AM

Lovely--and factual, Jeanne! Janice

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/24/2019 6:47:00 PM

they are amazing little guys for sure...I just hate being stung!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/21/2019 7:26:00 AM

"our pollinator of life" So wise as honey is such a healer.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/24/2019 6:46:00 PM

and yummy...you can't beat that.

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/19/2019 8:42:00 PM

it's amazing what these mighty little bees can accomplish! We had a huge nest in our walls a couple years ago, I was amazed at the size of the hive in a few months time! Nice haiku! good luck in the contest

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/19/2019 9:25:00 PM

Amazing would have been another good word to use. Thanks Sandra for the words.