Jeanne Mcgee Poet Haiku

Honey Life

honey in the hive
                                        our pollinator of life
                                          mighty little Bee










6-17-2019
haiku  5, 7, 5  Birds and Bees
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Gershon Wolf July 3, 2019 at 8:25 PM Mighty good one, Jeanne! Nice haiku. Best wishes, Gershon

Constance La France June 25, 2019 at 9:35 AM Jeanne, nicely done ! Jeanne Mcgee June 25, 2019 at 11:10 AM Well, I thought I had taken care of that! but no, you are right it was still off. My bad. Thanks for the date reminder. I should just get in the habit of that!

Anisha Dutta June 24, 2019 at 10:55 AM Good haiku. Well done. Jeanne Mcgee June 24, 2019 at 6:48 PM I do love to try more simple forms since I tend to run on sometimes. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Janice Canerdy June 22, 2019 at 10:37 AM Lovely--and factual, Jeanne! Janice Jeanne Mcgee June 24, 2019 at 6:47 PM they are amazing little guys for sure...I just hate being stung!

Caren Krutsinger June 21, 2019 at 7:26 AM "our pollinator of life" So wise as honey is such a healer. Jeanne Mcgee June 24, 2019 at 6:46 PM and yummy...you can't beat that.

Sandra Adams June 19, 2019 at 8:42 PM it's amazing what these mighty little bees can accomplish! We had a huge nest in our walls a couple years ago, I was amazed at the size of the hive in a few months time! Nice haiku! good luck in the contest Jeanne Mcgee June 19, 2019 at 9:25 PM Amazing would have been another good word to use. Thanks Sandra for the words.