Aiyah Torres Poet Blank verse

Honey, I'M Home

Honey,I'm home...
I whisper in my mind.
Too long I've been afar,
So long I lost his arms.
Honey, I'm home...
Nobody replies,
The home seems new,
No one hears my sound.
I see my children playing around.
Their voices are music to my heart.
I sit in our sofa,
watch the people around.
They didn't even notice,
They're busy roaming,
things I didn't mind.
I walk along to our garden.
I see a man wearing white.
"I know him! "I sigh.
He's holding a picture on his hand.
I call him,"Honey! I'm home."
I shout aloud...
He's so focus,
I saw him cry.
Tears are falling from his eyes.
I hold his shoulder,
kiss him on eyes.
Hold his hands,
He did not reply.
I hear him whisper,
"Honey! I'm home...
Why you didn't wait me,
Please open your eyes.
Happy anniversary,'hon!
 I'm home now...
Please don't die!"
Scene I still recall,
the last day I closed my eyes.





Entry for Dr. Ram Mehta's Free Poetry Contest
written:01.14.2014

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Joe Maverick February 4, 2014 at 2:36 PM what a haunting win with this one Ayiah..' Congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux February 2, 2014 at 9:56 AM Spookey! A very effective piece. Congratulations? Aiyah Torres February 3, 2014 at 4:17 PM Thank you, Rick!!! :0)

Anne Rutherford February 1, 2014 at 7:22 AM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Alyah. very well written. Anne Aiyah Torres February 3, 2014 at 4:17 PM thank you, Anne :0))

Dr.Ram Mehta February 1, 2014 at 6:21 AM Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your fine win. My next contest is "Husbands are in heaven whose wives scold not", AiyaH Aiyah Torres February 3, 2014 at 4:18 PM thank you, Dr. Ram!!! ..it's an honor to be picked as one of the winners on your contest.. :0)) thank you so much!!!! ...*__*

Chuck Melugin January 15, 2014 at 10:59 AM My Dear Aiyah This is a heartfelt creation that is worthy of any contest of the heart! It won mine!! Luv, chuck Aiyah Torres January 15, 2014 at 11:04 AM oh..thank you for supporting me to join in a contest...I wouldn't fail you,guyz.. :)) hope your instincts are right.. he he.. thank you for dropping by...^__^

Chris Hardy January 14, 2014 at 6:52 PM Awesome... Aiyah Torres February 3, 2014 at 4:18 PM thank you, Chris!!! :0))

Chris Hardy January 14, 2014 at 5:25 PM Oh my, this is awesome...seemed very real....then I read it was your imagination... Aiyah Torres January 14, 2014 at 5:31 PM yep, chris!!! ..thank you :))

Michael Byte January 14, 2014 at 3:43 PM So sad and emotional my friend kudos hugs. Aiyah Torres January 14, 2014 at 4:45 PM not this time. i think..i just enjoy writing about this theme..and i thank you for commending on this one..!! you are such a gift :)) Michael Byte January 14, 2014 at 4:27 PM He enjoys good quality writing like this. No matter where it places it will be an esteem builder. I did one and got honarable so strived to do better. Michael Byte January 14, 2014 at 4:23 PM Yes it is worth putting in you will finish higher than mine will probably Aiyah Torres January 14, 2014 at 4:18 PM d'ya think its qualified to join in a contest of Dr. Ram??.. Aiyah Torres January 14, 2014 at 4:16 PM no..i have no plan to join.. Michael Byte January 14, 2014 at 4:14 PM Very creative I thought it real are you in contest? Aiyah Torres January 14, 2014 at 3:57 PM just a fruit of my imagination..he he.. :))