Honey Bun

I was damaged with a heart like ice.
 You entered my life and in a trice
   had melted my frozen layers
     one by one. I've become
       hot as a furnace next
         your skin, my soul
           twin. Let's begin
             to live as one,
               my dearest
                  honey
                   bun.

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Susan Gentry

Date: 4/19/2018 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/17/2018 7:44:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win, Hugs Eve ~`*

Jean Murray
Date: 4/18/2018 1:16:00 AM

I must have gotten too hot for him Eve. Like all the others he has melted away.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2018 12:16:00 PM

- Congratulations, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 4/17/2018 12:38:00 PM

Again, thank you Anna-Lise.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/17/2018 11:27:00 AM

Dropping back to say congrats on your win Jean:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 4/17/2018 11:52:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Not too hot to handle and I'm delighted with my placement.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/17/2018 10:48:00 AM

Thanks for entering my contest with this hot tasty number, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/17/2018 11:50:00 AM

I'm glad you liked it Line. Thank you for the placement.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/19/2018 4:30:00 PM

Sometimes only an Etheree will do Jean. This is lovely! I enjoy writing them too. I hope your weather has gotten warmer. xxoo : )

Jean Murray
Date: 3/19/2018 4:52:00 PM

Today was sent by God it was so beautiful Connie. Next week to be the coldest in seven years they say. That's Ireland for you. Lovely to see you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2018 2:54:00 PM

Sweet as that honey bun, Jean. I love this form too~!

Jean Murray
Date: 3/19/2018 2:55:00 PM

Good evening Andrea. Thank you always for your lovely visits.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/19/2018 10:03:00 AM

this is stunning, Jean, I did have a little problem to get my poem to come down to a point ... I had to play around with the words... Luck in the contest... Hugs

Jean Murray
Date: 3/19/2018 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Silent One

Date: 3/19/2018 8:03:00 AM

awww this is sweet and nice shape..

Jean Murray
Date: 3/19/2018 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Silent.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 3/18/2018 10:41:00 PM

I LOVE IT. fave. <3

Jean Murray
Date: 3/19/2018 4:10:00 AM

That's sweet of you, thank you Maureen.

Robertina B.

Date: 3/18/2018 9:52:00 PM

Absolutely awesome Jean!! Bravo! I really enjoyed reading..

Jean Murray
Date: 3/19/2018 4:08:00 AM

Thank you Robertina. No matter what the form my mind insists on rhyme.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/18/2018 8:24:00 PM

Oh Jean, this is so beautifully expressed and such an impassioned poem. Hot stuff, my dear friend. Love it! Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Jean Murray
Date: 3/19/2018 4:07:00 AM

Remember my blue eyed boy Susan? We had such potential. It's a shame he neglected to tell me he was married.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/18/2018 6:45:00 PM

aww so endearing full of hope and passion in fact its hot hot hot lol jean and never give up hope that Mr right isn't there to stoke up that fire!:-0 hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 3/18/2018 7:11:00 PM

If Mr. Right only knew Jan.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/18/2018 6:35:00 PM

Beautifully done Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 3/18/2018 6:38:00 PM

Thank you Tom. Honey Bun if one of the endearing terms I use with my daughters, as is Precious and Pudding. My eldest girl told me recently she calls her partner Rupert Pudding as well. It would suit me, but neither of those two skinny milinkies.