Justcallme Britt Poet Couplet

Honey

Soft, silky, sweet and slow
Sexy, sensual and aromatic

OOOOOOOH

Please release your concealing top
Send me into a daze let mind go . . .

AAAAAAAH

Natural taste so rich it’s lovely
Thank you bee's for producing honey!

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Jayachandran Chakrapany June 20, 2012 at 10:28 AM a unique ''honey '' poem .jk

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet June 4, 2012 at 10:00 PM BRILLIANT VERY CAPTIVATING INDEED!!!!! YOU ARE THE HONEY AND THAT QUEEN BEE HONESTLY.....GREAT WRITE!!!!!

Dan Kearley June 4, 2012 at 9:16 PM Ooooo...And.... Aaahhhh.. I loved that! (Honey) (o:

Pace Ink-U-Script June 1, 2012 at 4:12 PM Lol laughing at Joise's comment on the bumblebees in his poem not producing honey..that threw me off for a slight moment..enjoyed this poem here..love your work Brittany!!! Justcallme Britt June 1, 2012 at 4:47 PM SO SWEET!! :D

Josie Whitehead June 1, 2012 at 3:38 PM Ooooh - yes I always thank the bees for their beautiful honey, and often write about them. I've just put a "bee poem" on here. Thank you bees. But I think my bumblebees in the poem don't produce honey, only pollinate the flowers. Justcallme Britt June 1, 2012 at 4:46 PM That is so true. I was too lazy to do my research beforehand. I know that's NOT a good thing LOL. I was really just struggling with a decent way to end the poem just in case you couldn't tell :/ Justcallme Britt June 1, 2012 at 4:46 PM But yea... I'm gonna try to fix that