Robert A. Dufresne Poet Tetractys

Honey

..                                      Bear
                                    scratching
                                   old hemlock
                            this territory is now his

                   must find a den to hibernate within
                               first rendezvous
                                 with neighbor
                                      female
                                        Bear

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Poet Destroyer A April 24, 2011 at 1:11 PM Robert ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 20, 2011 at 8:52 PM Congrats Robert on your featured poem this week on P.S. ... a great one to share with us all my friend with luv... wishing u a wonderful blessed and Happy Easter celebration ...

Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2011 at 11:50 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Robert. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 19, 2011 at 7:41 AM May I asume they shared the den...and honey? Cute one. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Robert. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Audrey Haick April 18, 2011 at 1:32 PM Congratulations on being featured this week on Soup, Robert. Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta April 18, 2011 at 12:39 PM Congratulatons on your poem being featured this week, Robert

Daver Austin April 18, 2011 at 5:13 AM Congrats on this selection. /by all means, "first rendevous with female bear." No use going to sleep horny. Love, daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K. December 7, 2009 at 5:59 AM love ths tetractys :) very cute & romantic indeed :) first one I've read about a bear :) enjoyed it very much :) thanks for your wonderful comments on my writes :)

Richard Pickett December 1, 2009 at 5:17 PM Wow a romantic Grizzly poem... I love it Robert...Well done with great flow and content....RdP

Charmaine Chircop November 23, 2009 at 1:32 PM Mr bear..miss Honey bear loves honey..and she definitely found a hive in your verses--sweet write indeed,and what about the hemlock,,,excellent work

Danny Nunn November 23, 2009 at 12:50 PM Den up with a big old she bear...good write Robert. I like...thanks of How Animal Communicate..I speak English and Spanish, I think it is try to understand the critter, we are all God's critters...have a good turkey day..Danny

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 23, 2009 at 5:17 AM Very cute and nice flowing lines in your poem.. could just see Mr. Bear looking for Ms. Bear to maybe share that honey?... nice to read something sweet early in the morning in New Jersey... where are u from Robert? .. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 23, 2009 at 2:15 AM BEAR!!! Do you every hunt them? Peace in nature is a wonderful life.

Moonbee Canady November 22, 2009 at 8:29 PM Very Nice Tetractys ... Very Visual and Upbeat (altho' Bear is Looking for Down-Time (smile)... MoonBee

Debbie Guzzi November 21, 2009 at 2:10 PM awww potential for a BIG cuddle here! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire November 21, 2009 at 6:37 AM Incredible poem, Robert. Dane Ann had suggested I check out your work and I'm grateful she did. I can see you bring a new, enlightened perspective to the Soup. I'll certainly be reading more of your poetry. Best wishes, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick November 21, 2009 at 4:32 AM Nicely done Tetractys. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara