Notes About The Poem

I first published this poem in 2009 in my book entitled 'Avant Garde Poetry Chapbook'. At the time, I was on holiday in Ireland.

Honest Sonnets Trio, and a Couplet

Honesty presides in these fresh sonnets
Where breathing seeks to set example
For future generations on thresholds
Of honest wit staying apt and ample
Poets questioning meaning in long life
While judging and evoking honesty
They hold themselves above impending strife
And espouse flamboyant ideas-majesty
Honesty leads the art of poetry
For a poem swallows up the reader
Engulfing him with central bardolatry
Wise words breathe an eternal breeder
If poets just stopped phony contrasting
Perhaps poems would thrive everlasting

How does a new poem live forever?
Let me count the ways poems purify
Through female free-form and virile villanelle
If only they knew to demystify
Poetry that writes to catch attention
He did not get from his early childhood
A quiet child worthy of mention
Whose poems represented brotherhood
Reactions of interconnectedness reign
Sultry sounds stream to entice sentiments
A hope that senses will linger the same
That baby poems do dance like Bacchants
That the earth-bard could only smash thoughts, too,
So his poem would dance dreamily inside you

From the heart blooms colorful rose bouquets
Surrounded, a sweet seizure flutters upright
In gushing, garrulous melodic phrase
Made to fit undying spiritual rite
Hearts merge and hands do as faint souls entreat
Fragments of glass in the chapel's skylight
Form and message merge on rustic countryseats
Bucolic grazing land's tearful twilight
Poetry overwhelms overt outcasts
On journeys into the poet's caves
A mysterious abyss of absinthe
Pathways crossing upward to vivid waves
Where, at last, souls meet to exchange nepenthe
That simply symbolizes completeness
In every illustrious, starry sweetness

Poetry is breath
To us bequeath!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Spence Sr Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Excellent post my sister of God's grace, Laura. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme of "Sonnet Inspiration" stands out, and the tone moves the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, with God's richest grace and blessings to you and your loved ones always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.Quick Poem Review:
Leffanta Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Critics panned "The Cremation of Sam McGee" by Robert Service, but it lit a fire inside many a freezing man! Aloha! Rico
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November 14, 2020 at 8:28 AM
These are three excellent sonnets..
Michael Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 3:43 PM
I enjoyed the read...All the best Laura Gail
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