Honest Friends

HONEST  FRIENDS


(Shakespearean Sonnet)
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Yes, some there are whose words  ring bright and true  -
A lover,  brother, children,  even foe; 
But honest  friends are rare and precious  too -
Their words can clear the darkness  with their  glow:


Who clap, then  warn  you that you’re  over-proud,
And always tell you when you’re in the  wrong  -
Your smile is nice  but, lord, your   laugh’s too loud  -
Who whisper  clear  in  midst of madding throng.


The wisdom-word  of  friends is always worth 
The seeking  far beyond   all  seeming-gold
That glisters  in the shadows  of this earth
Where all is asked  but nothing can be told.


          Bright  mirrors are the  friends who speak the truth,
          Outshining gaudy  riches,  fame,  or  youth.





	
Submitted for    	Jack OUT of the Box  Contest        of Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 8:39 AM
syd, a sonnet? wow, for wandering into the unknown, my fondest congrats on the high win! i'm star struck! how lucky i am to be writing amongst the talents on this site.:) huggs
Beck Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 11:31 AM
tried severa ltimes to reply to this comment but the system wont respond.......
Mehta Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 5:27 AM
My Congratulations on the win in the contest of deb, Sydney
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 5:17 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Jack Out Of Box" contest Sydney. Love, Carol
Villanueva Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 5:06 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! for the win.... well-deserved... so great!!! ***jun-jun
Guzzi Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 2:33 PM
Hey Syd seems you have the iambs going here try for pentameter? I really liked this so if you don't want to tweak it leave it and try another..go to ehow.com & do shakespearian sonnet keep to a 10 syllable count...smmmmoooooccccccchh. [This was too easy for you ;)] Light & Love
Beck Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 7:37 AM
Debs well I tried to disguise my normal doggerel but i guess it still "looks like mine" LOL Please clear up something for me ...do you want me to resubmit entirely or simply leave this as my entry? I can probably tweak it a little but I'd rather do another poem entirely in shakespearean sonnet full blown....just tell me what you want and I can do it. Thanks for all your time and attention...i genuinel y appreciate it....Syd
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