Honest

To lover,my soul
opens inward so much pain
woosh clean

Shared, now free
not lost,understood,woosh
broken bits and tears

flow, woosh did not burn
the man,the past, no more fear.
I was I am still
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Agustin Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 3:07 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Sands Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 4:05 PM
Nice! Welcome to poetry soup . Hope to see more :)
Andresen Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 2:38 PM
- I love writing haiku poems (5-7-5- syllable - A great tool: https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/ ) - The last one is perfect :) - Warm welcome to Poetry Soup, Randall :) - Greetings from Norway // Sun :)
Ulrich Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Thank you sunshine.. Haiku is fun! ):
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