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To lover,my soul opens inward so much pain woosh clean Shared, now free not lost,understood,woosh broken bits and tears flow, woosh did not burn the man,the past, no more fear. I was I am still

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Date: 6/11/2017 4:05:00 PM
Nice! Welcome to poetry soup . Hope to see more :)
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Date: 6/11/2017 2:38:00 PM
- I love writing haiku poems (5-7-5- syllable - A great tool: https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/ ) - The last one is perfect :) - Warm welcome to Poetry Soup, Randall :) - Greetings from Norway // Sun :)
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Date: 6/11/2017 3:52:00 PM
Thank you sunshine.. Haiku is fun! ):