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While i watched in awe at the size and shape! a vast shiplike torpedo with indents deep. i smiled expectantly the Chinese were here! then stumbled at the speed it disappeared. My pals were all swimming and laughing around! now squeals of fighting all over the ground! Made to act like drunken fools! in the mornings light,they,d forgotten the thrill! footnote.Was i the only witness just because im mad?

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