Hometown Visit

My last visit home was sad, but true
All weekend I waited, just to see you
But the expectations I held, were much too high
Lowest place on the totem pole, there was I 

When finally, we met after a lot of time wasted
It felt like my presence was nothing but hasted
My words, though genuine, read much like a song
Of love, loss, sorrow, and timing gone wrong

Your response to my letter, still I await
Forward motion requires a slow, but steady pace
The absence of you in my day, at times it's still hard
It's easier for you, but you had a head start

Luckily, this visit home was different in nature
A reason to celebrate, made time pass much easier
Still, reminders were there, and felt in my midst
Sending a text to say hello, was hard to resist 

So as this week passes, and a new one begins
Seven more days to wonder if or where, I fit in
But the longer I wait, the more healing I do
What matters most in the end, is I get over you

August 24, 2020
@katladyt_

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/24/2020 9:16:00 PM
Hello Tammy ... the past is just that. To go back home in hope that you can mend something and start over again sadly doesn't happen. Everyone moves on - enjoyed your verse Tammy - Lindsay
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Date: 8/24/2020 7:39:00 PM
This is sadly so true, when one has high expectations, and the other does not pick up on it or does not see it at all. Well penned.
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Date: 8/24/2020 7:00:00 PM
Heartfelt piece Tammy. I just wrote a poem Talking To The Moon that describes how we feel when someone leaves in a relationship, its ironic I read this when I just wrote that piece.
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