Hometown Rot

don’t judge fallen fruit
by the color of its skin
rot begins inside

I visit my youthful stomping ground less and less each year. Somehow, the place seems damaged to me. Like a ripe apple that has fallen into the grass. It might be shiny and delicious looking on the top, but when you bend to pick it up, you can see it's mushy and bruised underneath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rolland Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 3:54 AM
powerful poetry, to think about whoever you are, enjoyed
M  Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 7:43 PM
Such true and powerful words my friend! Love it! Debx
Buhagiar Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 2:13 AM
So true. Rot begins from the inside.
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 3:11 AM
Sad to see Jerry, I try and avoid going back to where I grew up, prefer to remember how it was before the rot set in. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 10:01 AM
Hello Jerry Brotherton , Yes I agree. Roit begins on the inside of the fruit. My friend, Enjoy your day. Your friend, /Darlene/
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